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PostSubject: Re: Unfinished Business [Fanfiction]   Tue Oct 25, 2011 9:38 pm

Hey Azure, I didn't even get to read the second chapter! xD

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PostSubject: Re: Unfinished Business [Fanfiction]   Tue Oct 25, 2011 9:45 pm

I still value your sanity, all.

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PostSubject: Re: Unfinished Business [Fanfiction]   Tue Oct 25, 2011 9:49 pm

Thank you! Thank you for doing something about Belle's post! Smile
And as a thank you, here's a (hurried) fifth chapter:

Chapter 5:
 
The Mr. China a while ago at the Parade of Nations is so cute... *_*

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PostSubject: Re: Unfinished Business [Fanfiction]   Tue Oct 25, 2011 9:59 pm

Fufu, even if you said it was hurried, Lumen-san, I found it quite an enjoyable read XD. [No sarcasm intended, really.]

Lucia's imaginations and Blake misspelling Hitler as Hitman sent me laughing ><" .

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PostSubject: Re: Unfinished Business [Fanfiction]   Tue Oct 25, 2011 10:00 pm

Don't forget "Chairman Maw".

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PostSubject: Re: Unfinished Business [Fanfiction]   Tue Oct 25, 2011 10:02 pm

I was about to include that too when I realized I forgot what Chairman Maw is supposed to be... XD

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PostSubject: Re: Unfinished Business [Fanfiction]   Tue Oct 25, 2011 10:05 pm

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I was about to include that too when I realized I forgot what Chairman Maw is supposed to be... XD

Tsk, tsk. You shall not be forgiven. I will explode you.

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PostSubject: Re: Unfinished Business [Fanfiction]   Tue Oct 25, 2011 10:06 pm

Nooooo
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PostSubject: Re: Unfinished Business [Fanfiction]   Tue Oct 25, 2011 10:07 pm

Why Do I feel that Sir Kirro always like exploding someone?

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PostSubject: Re: Unfinished Business [Fanfiction]   Tue Oct 25, 2011 10:11 pm

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Fufu, even if you said it was hurried, Lumen-san, I found it quite an enjoyable read XD. [No sarcasm intended, really.]

Lucia's imaginations and Blake misspelling Hitler as Hitman sent me laughing ><" .

Thanks ;3
Lucia's thoughts in the beginning is totally random. XD

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PostSubject: Re: Unfinished Business [Fanfiction]   Thu Oct 27, 2011 12:20 am

Preview for next chapter:

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Aaaand another:

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I can't really type out the fifth chapter today... -_-

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PostSubject: Re: Unfinished Business [Fanfiction]   Thu Oct 27, 2011 12:30 am

Lumen you know how deeply I love you now?

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PostSubject: Re: Unfinished Business [Fanfiction]   Thu Oct 27, 2011 9:07 am

Yes, and I love you too now, shine. :'D

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PostSubject: Re: Unfinished Business [Fanfiction]   Thu Oct 27, 2011 6:52 pm

Very Happy You made my day!

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PostSubject: Re: Unfinished Business [Fanfiction]   Fri Oct 28, 2011 6:28 pm

Chapter 6:
 
Why do I have this growing gut feeling that Lee's getting more OOC as each chapter pass? ;_;

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PostSubject: Re: Unfinished Business [Fanfiction]   Fri Oct 28, 2011 6:54 pm

Quote :
“Mahjong, I see!” one of them said

HAHAHAHAHA.

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PostSubject: Re: Unfinished Business [Fanfiction]   Fri Oct 28, 2011 6:58 pm

I was contemplating to myself whether I should add that, lol.
Thanks! Smile

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PostSubject: Re: Unfinished Business [Fanfiction]   Sun Oct 30, 2011 11:57 am

And here I am bearing a...

...preview.

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And another one from the same chapter..

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Gaaaaah, I know Lee's so OOC now. >_>

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PostSubject: Re: Unfinished Business [Fanfiction]   Sun Oct 30, 2011 11:59 am

Hahahaha! But he looks more... lesss... well whatever, you get what I mean XD

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PostSubject: Re: Unfinished Business [Fanfiction]   Sun Oct 30, 2011 12:08 pm

To be honest I have no idea what you mean XD
And you see my new avvie? I drew that for the sake of lulz. /fail

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PostSubject: Re: Unfinished Business [Fanfiction]   Sun Oct 30, 2011 12:20 pm

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To be honest I have no idea what you mean XD
And you see my new avvie? I drew that for the sake of lulz. /fail

Noooo? Where?

And stop lying to me, Lumen! I read through you~!

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PostSubject: Re: Unfinished Business [Fanfiction]   Sun Oct 30, 2011 12:29 pm

My new avviiiie~ The black-and-white crappy pic with Lucia and Lee. XD

And I swear! I have NO idea! D:

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PostSubject: Re: Unfinished Business [Fanfiction]   Sun Oct 30, 2011 12:32 pm

OH GOSH, IT'S LEE? OMG! I never thought it was him! But it's cuuute Smile

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PostSubject: Re: Unfinished Business [Fanfiction]   Sun Oct 30, 2011 12:34 pm

Well, he's turning backwards, so it isn't obvious. XD
And who else in doppelganger has long manly hair? WHO ELSE! 8D


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PostSubject: Re: Unfinished Business [Fanfiction]   Sun Oct 30, 2011 12:36 pm

I think I don't have a brain tonight. Gosh, it's 1h30 AM here XD Maybe I didn't thought about it!

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