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PostSubject: Poems, anyone?   Mon Nov 08, 2010 8:14 pm

Not really fanart, but err.... should I call them FAN poems? xDDD

Anyway, they are poems I wrote for our Poetry Slam at school. I'm so active on this one. I have written 4 entries for this one: The Dying Symphony of Love (Nobody heard it before, meeeh), Emotionless (check my thread at the otome games), and 2 Fantasia-inspired poems (I actually stole revised a line/stanza of Vermilion Carousel on one of them. Lol.) One is in progress, but also Fantasia-inspired. Not that obvious, though.

Okay, so here are the two I'll submit. I have written a poem about **** and ****** but I'll be writing one for ******** too. Smile

EDIT: I'll always try my best to relate the poems I make to Fantasia. JUST. FOR. YOU. AND. AZURE. Okay? Very Happy
Because.....

....Fantasia has taken over my life and declared colonialism on it and Zephyr the president forces me to write these poems because if he didn't like it, he'll send me to Thanos as food....

...I all love you Fantasia fans!!!! Smile

I'm so POETIC. I choose words that when you REALLY know the character's story, you'll understand what I mean. If you don't know their real story, everybody's gonna think I'm speaking nonsense.
And I'm not a good poet, so I'll put the poems in spoilers.
GUESS WHO AM I BASING THE POEMS. IF YOU PLAYED MoGF, I KNOW YOU CAN GUESS WHO. >: )

Third Life, Third Chance
Spoiler:
 

Crazy
Spoiler:
 

Independent
Spoiler:
 

Secrets Yet Untold
Spoiler:
 

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PostSubject: Re: Poems, anyone?   Mon Nov 08, 2010 8:57 pm

Figure who is it! But, I think the first one is better with the third life.....

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PostSubject: Re: Poems, anyone?   Mon Nov 08, 2010 8:59 pm

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Figure who is it! But, I think the first one is better with the third life.....

Yeah... You're right... I'll rewrite the title in my submission paper then....
*edits my submission paper*

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PostSubject: Re: Poems, anyone?   Tue Nov 09, 2010 4:29 am

Cool there about Shea right it's go to be him right right that's what my hearts telling me lol I mean it.

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PostSubject: Re: Poems, anyone?   Tue Nov 09, 2010 5:34 pm

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Cool there about Shea right it's go to be him right right that's what my hearts telling me lol I mean it.

Yes....
it's his poem.
I hope that poem wins its way to the Poetry Slam....xDDDD

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PostSubject: Re: Poems, anyone?   Tue Nov 09, 2010 6:21 pm

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Cool there about Shea right it's go to be him right right that's what my hearts telling me lol I mean it.

Yes....
it's his poem.
I hope that poem wins its way to the Poetry Slam....xDDDD



Cool I hope so too.

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PostSubject: Re: Poems, anyone?   Tue Nov 09, 2010 6:30 pm

Independent poem is finished and up~

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PostSubject: Re: Poems, anyone?   Tue Nov 09, 2010 6:46 pm

It was good! I like it. Because the only one girl we know (right now) is Len, so it must be about Len! Nyehehehehehehehehe, somehow I imagine about Thanos will be happy to hear the line about killing Dragon. Thanos wife must kickin' ass! Nyehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe

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PostSubject: Re: Poems, anyone?   Tue Nov 09, 2010 6:52 pm

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It was good! I like it. Because the only one girl we know (right now) is Len, so it must be about Len! Nyehehehehehehehehe, somehow I imagine about Thanos will be happy to hear the line about killing Dragon. Thanos wife must kickin' ass! Nyehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe

That is actually the stanza I liked best....

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PostSubject: Re: Poems, anyone?   Wed Nov 10, 2010 5:51 pm

Secrets Yet Untold, a new poem for a Fantasia character, is up. : ))))
Hope you enjoy it. Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Poems, anyone?   Thu Nov 11, 2010 1:51 pm

Let me guess........ It is Zephyr!!!!

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PostSubject: Re: Poems, anyone?   Thu Nov 11, 2010 6:26 pm

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Let me guess........ It is Zephyr!!!!

Yessum. Smile
The piano part suggests it, right? Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Poems, anyone?   Wed Nov 17, 2010 6:02 pm

UPDATE: I got the contestant list for the Poetry Slam (which will happen somewhere this week) and I'm included. My entry that got in is "Independent". Please wish me luck, I'll need it. ~ xD

Next month, I'll join again and try to make poems based on RotA and RoT's endings~ I actually made one for RoT's "The Demon Lord's Lover", which I shortened to "The Demon's Lover", but it is for the local Poetry Slam, not the whole school contest proper~

Plus, does anybody knows some declamation pieces that is easy to memorize?

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PostSubject: Re: Poems, anyone?   Sat Nov 20, 2010 3:39 pm

LumenAstrum wrote:
Not really fanart, but err.... should I call them FAN poems? xDDD

Anyway, they are poems I wrote for our Poetry Slam at school. I'm so active on this one. I have written 4 entries for this one: The Dying Symphony of Love (Nobody heard it before, meeeh), Emotionless (check my thread at the otome games), and 2 Fantasia-inspired poems (I actually stole revised a line/stanza of Vermilion Carousel on one of them. Lol.) One is in progress, but also Fantasia-inspired. Not that obvious, though.

Okay, so here are the two I'll submit. I have written a poem about **** and ****** but I'll be writing one for ******** too. Smile

EDIT: I'll always try my best to relate the poems I make to Fantasia. JUST. FOR. YOU. AND. AZURE. Okay? Very Happy
Because.....

....Fantasia has taken over my life and declared colonialism on it and Zephyr the president forces me to write these poems because if he didn't like it, he'll send me to Thanos as food....

...I all love you Fantasia fans!!!! Smile

I'm so POETIC. I choose words that when you REALLY know the character's story, you'll understand what I mean. If you don't know their real story, everybody's gonna think I'm speaking nonsense.
And I'm not a good poet, so I'll put the poems in spoilers.
GUESS WHO AM I BASING THE POEMS. IF YOU PLAYED MoGF, I KNOW YOU CAN GUESS WHO. >: )

Third Life, Third Chance
Spoiler:
 

Crazy
Spoiler:
 

Independent
Spoiler:
 

Secrets Yet Untold
Spoiler:
 

I have a question.. who's the one in Crazy..??
*utterly clueless* scratch
xDDD

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PostSubject: Re: Poems, anyone?   Sat Nov 20, 2010 3:52 pm

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LumenAstrum wrote:
Not really fanart, but err.... should I call them FAN poems? xDDD

Anyway, they are poems I wrote for our Poetry Slam at school. I'm so active on this one. I have written 4 entries for this one: The Dying Symphony of Love (Nobody heard it before, meeeh), Emotionless (check my thread at the otome games), and 2 Fantasia-inspired poems (I actually stole revised a line/stanza of Vermilion Carousel on one of them. Lol.) One is in progress, but also Fantasia-inspired. Not that obvious, though.

Okay, so here are the two I'll submit. I have written a poem about **** and ****** but I'll be writing one for ******** too. Smile

EDIT: I'll always try my best to relate the poems I make to Fantasia. JUST. FOR. YOU. AND. AZURE. Okay? Very Happy
Because.....

....Fantasia has taken over my life and declared colonialism on it and Zephyr the president forces me to write these poems because if he didn't like it, he'll send me to Thanos as food....

...I all love you Fantasia fans!!!! Smile

I'm so POETIC. I choose words that when you REALLY know the character's story, you'll understand what I mean. If you don't know their real story, everybody's gonna think I'm speaking nonsense.
And I'm not a good poet, so I'll put the poems in spoilers.
GUESS WHO AM I BASING THE POEMS. IF YOU PLAYED MoGF, I KNOW YOU CAN GUESS WHO. >: )

Third Life, Third Chance
Spoiler:
 

Crazy
Spoiler:
 

Independent
Spoiler:
 

Secrets Yet Untold
Spoiler:
 

I have a question.. who's the one in Crazy..??
*utterly clueless* scratch
xDDD

Who is the one that I always shout...
Spoiler:
 
...for? And the one that Mabbie threatens me to write his fanfic or he'll tear up my picture of "Connor".

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PostSubject: Re: Poems, anyone?   Sat Nov 20, 2010 4:01 pm

Then between Ava and Al then!

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PostSubject: Re: Poems, anyone?   Sat Nov 20, 2010 4:07 pm

I won't be telling who, though. >D

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PostSubject: Re: Poems, anyone?   Sat Nov 20, 2010 4:22 pm

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valen_albaderon36 wrote:
LumenAstrum wrote:
Not really fanart, but err.... should I call them FAN poems? xDDD

Anyway, they are poems I wrote for our Poetry Slam at school. I'm so active on this one. I have written 4 entries for this one: The Dying Symphony of Love (Nobody heard it before, meeeh), Emotionless (check my thread at the otome games), and 2 Fantasia-inspired poems (I actually stole revised a line/stanza of Vermilion Carousel on one of them. Lol.) One is in progress, but also Fantasia-inspired. Not that obvious, though.

Okay, so here are the two I'll submit. I have written a poem about **** and ****** but I'll be writing one for ******** too. Smile

EDIT: I'll always try my best to relate the poems I make to Fantasia. JUST. FOR. YOU. AND. AZURE. Okay? Very Happy
Because.....

....Fantasia has taken over my life and declared colonialism on it and Zephyr the president forces me to write these poems because if he didn't like it, he'll send me to Thanos as food....

...I all love you Fantasia fans!!!! Smile

I'm so POETIC. I choose words that when you REALLY know the character's story, you'll understand what I mean. If you don't know their real story, everybody's gonna think I'm speaking nonsense.
And I'm not a good poet, so I'll put the poems in spoilers.
GUESS WHO AM I BASING THE POEMS. IF YOU PLAYED MoGF, I KNOW YOU CAN GUESS WHO. >: )

Third Life, Third Chance
Spoiler:
 

Crazy
Spoiler:
 

Independent
Spoiler:
 

Secrets Yet Untold
Spoiler:
 

I have a question.. who's the one in Crazy..??
*utterly clueless* scratch
xDDD

Who is the one that I always shout...
Spoiler:
 
...for? And the one that Mabbie threatens me to write his fanfic or he'll tear up my picture of "Connor".


Ohh.. JUST WHAT I THOUGHT. sigh.. hahaha..
i have something to tell you anyway..

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PostSubject: Re: Poems, anyone?   Sat Nov 20, 2010 4:29 pm

valen_albaderon36 wrote:
LumenAstrum wrote:
valen_albaderon36 wrote:
LumenAstrum wrote:
Not really fanart, but err.... should I call them FAN poems? xDDD

Anyway, they are poems I wrote for our Poetry Slam at school. I'm so active on this one. I have written 4 entries for this one: The Dying Symphony of Love (Nobody heard it before, meeeh), Emotionless (check my thread at the otome games), and 2 Fantasia-inspired poems (I actually stole revised a line/stanza of Vermilion Carousel on one of them. Lol.) One is in progress, but also Fantasia-inspired. Not that obvious, though.

Okay, so here are the two I'll submit. I have written a poem about **** and ****** but I'll be writing one for ******** too. Smile

EDIT: I'll always try my best to relate the poems I make to Fantasia. JUST. FOR. YOU. AND. AZURE. Okay? Very Happy
Because.....

....Fantasia has taken over my life and declared colonialism on it and Zephyr the president forces me to write these poems because if he didn't like it, he'll send me to Thanos as food....

...I all love you Fantasia fans!!!! Smile

I'm so POETIC. I choose words that when you REALLY know the character's story, you'll understand what I mean. If you don't know their real story, everybody's gonna think I'm speaking nonsense.
And I'm not a good poet, so I'll put the poems in spoilers.
GUESS WHO AM I BASING THE POEMS. IF YOU PLAYED MoGF, I KNOW YOU CAN GUESS WHO. >: )

Third Life, Third Chance
Spoiler:
 

Crazy
Spoiler:
 

Independent
Spoiler:
 

Secrets Yet Untold
Spoiler:
 

I have a question.. who's the one in Crazy..??
*utterly clueless* scratch
xDDD

Who is the one that I always shout...
Spoiler:
 
...for? And the one that Mabbie threatens me to write his fanfic or he'll tear up my picture of "Connor".


Ohh.. JUST WHAT I THOUGHT. sigh.. hahaha..
i have something to tell you anyway..

What are you going to tell?
Anyway, Mabbie kept on torturing me before, but now... she can't because I'm done with that stupid scene. Which kept on killing me. I will write a poem about Alviss's good side for December... Smile

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PostSubject: Re: Poems, anyone?   Sat Nov 20, 2010 4:33 pm

LumenAstrum wrote:
valen_albaderon36 wrote:
LumenAstrum wrote:
valen_albaderon36 wrote:
LumenAstrum wrote:
Not really fanart, but err.... should I call them FAN poems? xDDD

Anyway, they are poems I wrote for our Poetry Slam at school. I'm so active on this one. I have written 4 entries for this one: The Dying Symphony of Love (Nobody heard it before, meeeh), Emotionless (check my thread at the otome games), and 2 Fantasia-inspired poems (I actually stole revised a line/stanza of Vermilion Carousel on one of them. Lol.) One is in progress, but also Fantasia-inspired. Not that obvious, though.

Okay, so here are the two I'll submit. I have written a poem about **** and ****** but I'll be writing one for ******** too. Smile

EDIT: I'll always try my best to relate the poems I make to Fantasia. JUST. FOR. YOU. AND. AZURE. Okay? Very Happy
Because.....

....Fantasia has taken over my life and declared colonialism on it and Zephyr the president forces me to write these poems because if he didn't like it, he'll send me to Thanos as food....

...I all love you Fantasia fans!!!! Smile

I'm so POETIC. I choose words that when you REALLY know the character's story, you'll understand what I mean. If you don't know their real story, everybody's gonna think I'm speaking nonsense.
And I'm not a good poet, so I'll put the poems in spoilers.
GUESS WHO AM I BASING THE POEMS. IF YOU PLAYED MoGF, I KNOW YOU CAN GUESS WHO. >: )

Third Life, Third Chance
Spoiler:
 

Crazy
Spoiler:
 

Independent
Spoiler:
 

Secrets Yet Untold
Spoiler:
 

I have a question.. who's the one in Crazy..??
*utterly clueless* scratch
xDDD

Who is the one that I always shout...
Spoiler:
 
...for? And the one that Mabbie threatens me to write his fanfic or he'll tear up my picture of "Connor".


Ohh.. JUST WHAT I THOUGHT. sigh.. hahaha..
i have something to tell you anyway..

What are you going to tell?
Anyway, Mabbie kept on torturing me before, but now... she can't because I'm done with that stupid scene. Which kept on killing me. I will write a poem about Alviss's good side for December... Smile

I'll tell you on FB..
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