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PostSubject: Whoever You Are - SheaxLen Fanfiction (STILL IN PROGRESS)   Mon Nov 01, 2010 4:18 pm

Don't ask me why am I writing this.
Haah~ I really love this pairing now. But Shea's just second on the-boys-that-I-want-Len-to-marry list. xD
But I hope you enjoy, because it's my first ever published fan fiction. I have been writing fan fictions for different games and stories and TV shows and whatever, but I never shared it with anyone. The sharing that I do with some fics is that I write them in a notebook and let my classmates read it.

Chapter 1 : http://katara-watertribe-14.deviantart.com/art/Whoever-You-Are-Chapter-1-184647609
Chapter 2 : http://katara-watertribe-14.deviantart.com/art/Whoever-You-Are-Chapter-2-184657532

Please comment about my writing skills. I'm not that great in writing stories. I just got this idea when I imagined Lenarche in a kimono and excessive makeup. xD
And if you find it offending, keep in mind that there is a fan fiction I am writing that's worse (a lot more worse) than this one. And you'll ALL find me a pervert if I post it here. Sometimes my bad side surfaces on its own. And my classmates read it too, and I almost got the title of Environmentalist. Think green, no? Smile
I'll update if I made more chapters~

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PostSubject: Re: Whoever You Are - SheaxLen Fanfiction (STILL IN PROGRESS)   Mon Nov 01, 2010 4:29 pm

What the hell!!!!!!!!!! This Len! That Len that I ever know! That.... that..... was...... the most weird than the most weird thing ever! (okay, i over act again...)

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PostSubject: Re: Whoever You Are - SheaxLen Fanfiction (STILL IN PROGRESS)   Mon Nov 01, 2010 4:31 pm

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What the hell!!!!!!!!!! This Len! That Len that I ever know! That.... that..... was...... the most weird than the most weird thing ever! (okay, i over act again...)
I know... I just got that idea out of nowhere. ^^;
I'm such a weird writer....

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PostSubject: Re: Whoever You Are - SheaxLen Fanfiction (STILL IN PROGRESS)   Mon Nov 01, 2010 4:34 pm

But the side of Len that put her sword to Alviss neck is so likely of her. I already imagine the end of it though.....

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PostSubject: Re: Whoever You Are - SheaxLen Fanfiction (STILL IN PROGRESS)   Mon Nov 01, 2010 4:40 pm

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But the side of Len that put her sword to Alviss neck is so likely of her. I already imagine the end of it though.....
She does that because she doesn't trust Alviss and Shea yet in that time. Smile
And see, they are disguising as the establishment's customers, and Lenarche doesn't trust each and every client of the brothel...

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PostSubject: Re: Whoever You Are - SheaxLen Fanfiction (STILL IN PROGRESS)   Mon Nov 01, 2010 4:50 pm

Well, you know what..... this brothel thing is.... a little..... weird! I never heard some renting girl for a MONTH! In my place it will be just once or one day or two.

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PostSubject: Re: Whoever You Are - SheaxLen Fanfiction (STILL IN PROGRESS)   Mon Nov 01, 2010 4:58 pm

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Well, you know what..... this brothel thing is.... a little..... weird! I never heard some renting girl for a MONTH! In my place it will be just once or one day or two.

It's my story. I'm the one writing. And plus, to add a little twist in there. Smile

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PostSubject: Re: Whoever You Are - SheaxLen Fanfiction (STILL IN PROGRESS)   Mon Nov 01, 2010 5:21 pm

It's pretty good I like it.

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PostSubject: Re: Whoever You Are - SheaxLen Fanfiction (STILL IN PROGRESS)   Mon Nov 01, 2010 7:30 pm

Thank you~
Second chapter is up~

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PostSubject: Re: Whoever You Are - SheaxLen Fanfiction (STILL IN PROGRESS)   Tue Nov 02, 2010 6:26 am

*still shocked from first chapter* It's more good that the first one! At least it still have Len part that I know.

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PostSubject: Re: Whoever You Are - SheaxLen Fanfiction (STILL IN PROGRESS)   Tue Nov 02, 2010 10:57 am

Is it me or is Shea a bit out of character?

But nice story anyway.

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PostSubject: Re: Whoever You Are - SheaxLen Fanfiction (STILL IN PROGRESS)   Tue Nov 02, 2010 11:53 am

Azure, the Out of Character issues will be straightened out at three~

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PostSubject: Re: Whoever You Are - SheaxLen Fanfiction (STILL IN PROGRESS)   Mon Sep 19, 2011 10:15 pm

Okay, after almost a year of believing this thing is forever deleted, I managed to recover those missing files in my USB and found this.

Here ya go. Third chapter I wrote up. Unfinished, and crappy. Real crappy. Don't expect it to be edited, I'm lazy.

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It was written a year ago, I think. Before all those changes in the characters were even implemented. So yeah. I won't continue this forever, too lazy, too busy.

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PostSubject: Re: Whoever You Are - SheaxLen Fanfiction (STILL IN PROGRESS)   Wed Oct 19, 2011 10:01 am

No offense but I found it hard to distinguish thought and dialogue.

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PostSubject: Re: Whoever You Are - SheaxLen Fanfiction (STILL IN PROGRESS)   Wed Oct 19, 2011 5:14 pm

It's because I was too lazy to italicize stuff. XD

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